I have a paper written but have some notes from the teacher and I am struggling

I have a paper written but have some notes from the teacher and I am struggling to bring it together and need help. Her comments below
. I’m proud of your work on this essay, and I enjoyed reading your writing about your mom! What a special mom you have impacting your life and so many others by her love and good deeds.I’m sorry you dealt with such awful bullies, and I’m glad your mom helped you walk through this; I’m glad you’re at GRCA. You have overall good organization and info. For more points, ensure you follow all requirements (MLA format, adding in cited textual evidence in each body paragraph, including a Work(s) Cited, etc.).Be sure you have a strong thesis statement as the last line in your introduction, and be sure each body paragraph is sandwiched with strong topic and conclusion sentences. Be sure you take time to proofread.

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